Changes to be made/ Evaluation

Overall i think my magazine is good quailty but there are a few things that are letting me down. I will keep the picture the same but the date i used '24th november' i will get rid of as it dosn't look effective and is too big and is using up space i could use for something else. Also the date of the issue looks uneven because the date '2008' looks much bigger than the month 'December' so i will ensure that they are even but still stand out so. When i have made these small changes i will fill up the space on the right with more articles related to college news.


As a whole it is there to represent all students between the age 16-19, at Wyke College, both male and female. The main image on the cover only tends to show the male social group of the rugby team. To represent the females of the college i could have had a photo of perhaps the dance classes or drama classes of them working.
If this college magazine was to be distributed the best place for it to be would be at Wyke College but also could be posted around the local area, for outsiders to know about the college nearby. The audience for the magazine would be the parents of the students who go to the college or parents of those who want to start the college, the way to attract there attentiopn would be sending a copy to people who ring up asking about the college.
I think as a whole the cover has not been well planned out and i could have used more time researching other college magazines, but they key thing is, is that i improve this when doing the main task, learn from my mistakes and produce a better outcome.